Below is my submission under 400
words @www.figment.com on the topic: Reader and Character are falling
in love.
“Hi, what is your name? Will you be my friend?”
a husky wafted voice came out of nowhere.
I was at page 31 of an old thriller, based on 18th
century France, that my grandfather acquired during his visit to countryside.
It was gathering dust for quite some years in the musty corner of the
naphthalene smelling attic. Carefully I was turning the pages -turned yellowish
brown and cleaning them while straightening the creases.
“I see you are taking good care of me for some time
now. Thanks for taking me out of that cloistered shelf with dimly lit space and
almost no air to breathe”, rattled the voice.
Being baffled and confused with the suddenness of the
situation, I closed the book hard to silence it. Thinking it might be some
paranormal activity, I threw the book down. A beautiful girl of 12 years with
an angelic look in a blue floral frock, brownish hair neatly plaited was
smiling there in front of me. With golden complexion and medium built for that age, her big
dreamy eyes were telling me so many things.
While I was making efforts to take my mind away from
what just happened, she was pulling me towards her. Almost in a trance, I
had to give in and picked up the book again. I asked myself if this is really
happening and what Rowling wrote about life being imprisoned in a book is
unfolding in front of me.
She eventually started telling me her story.
“You know, I have started liking you a lot - you are
of my age and none has touched me so delicately so far. You must be a good
person at heart. Only thing I remember about my early days is that we used to
be a happy family and now I can’t recollect even my parents. I have not been
loved for such a long time” said my new friend as she clutched my hands
tightly.
Dumbfounded I was sitting there motionless listening
to her with a liking growing inside me- like a flame of a slow burning
candle. My first interaction with adolescent love - did not realize how sweet
it is. I was just getting drifted towards her and entangled in her persona with
each passing moment.
Good narration.
ReplyDeleteIndrani, Thanks for reading. Appreciate your comment.
DeleteGrippingly written! Gr8 write! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Amrita. Good that you liked it. Appreciate your comments.
DeleteGood one :) So it was a dream!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Anita, for reading through and your comments. Yes, it was only a dream :-).
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